Descriptive Writing

(I see the girl with a brown, warm coat walking in the deep green forest. I hear the crunches of her feet as she wanders and steps on the crunchy brown leaves. I see the girl stumble on the brown stick. I see her brown hair bunched into a bun. I see the girls brown leather boots get muddy in the ground.)

(I see the brown damp branches growing everywhere. I see the green grass on the wet muddy ground. I see the green leaves on the trees branches. I hear the leaves rustling as the wind blows. I see the leaves flying in the air as the elegant wind blows.)

(I see small sunlight coming from the sky as the branches block the light. I see how deep the forest is and see no light. I hear the breeze gust elegantly. I can barely see the sky with all the brown branches blocking the sunlight.)

I have reread my work.

My work was checked by Hulita

Done

Here is my descriptive writing that I have done today. I don't really like doing writing but it isn't as bad.
I think I need to work on my vocabulary more and add more interesting words.